Friday, 20 September 2019

the greatest sorm

















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the Greatest Storm One day there where people that are in a Big Storm They died in the storm and family`s sad and they went home and said a prayer for the people that died and they went back to the people and same of the family`s and kids went and got the died people so they can teak they can to the hall for them to pray for them. When they where praying for the people that where died they went back it was no Fire so they call 111 Everyone was so scared so than the fire out so everyone was now happy. I can see that the Ship is all black because it was on fire.
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  1. Anonymous20 November 2019 at 09:22

    hi Mase, very funny story but you need to work on your punctuation like full stops and capital letters. why did you choose to make a story about this?

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  2. Anonymous11 December 2019 at 09:14

    hi miller its me mase you are right i need hlep with my spelling.

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